An Analysis of the Character
Phoenix Jackson in "A Worn Path"
by Joyce Kay
B. Wampler
Eudora Welty, in her character Phoenix Jackson,
creates humanity's counterpart of the phoenix firebird from oriental tradition.
Although Phoenix Jackson can not lay claim to the immortality manifested
by consuming fiery rebirths (as does the mythological bird), she possesses a
fiery spirit and is consumed by love for her grandchild. Ana4rzing the
character of Phoenix is pleasurable because the characteristics of her
"roundness" are primarily positive, static traits. She is tenacious,
confident, wise, and resolute with a clear sense of purpose which guides her
fearlessly toward her goal. One word can summarize Phoenix‑‑noble.
Even in the one situation when the reader sees Phoenix being sly, her slyness
is immediately forgivable. Her slyness is a minor negative characteristic in
comparison to her innumerable positive ones and is not a conflicting quality.
It is, instead, justifiable in light of the pureness of her motivation‑‑love.
Ihe similarities of the
phoenix bird and Phoenix Jackson are readily apparent in the author's physical
description of Phoenix; "...her head tied in a red rag," "...a
golden color ran underneath," and "...a yellow burning under the
dark"(457). Further confirming the parable between the woman and the bird
is the cornme made by Phoenix at the spring, "Sweetgum makes the
water sweet' (459). (Sweet‑gum K supposedly, the firebird's source of
nourishment) Since it is obvious that Ms. Welty has made these comparisons, it
is noteworthy that the phoenix, in addition to symbolizing immortality, is said
to be a good and wonderful bird, possessing qualities not unlike the eagle's:
nobility and powers of endurance. Phoenix Jackson shares these same qualities.
Phoenix Jackson is an old
Negro woman (456). Being black and female in Natchez, Nfississippi, any time
prior to 1963 was particularly treacherous. Since Phoenix refers to the
"Surrender," the reader knows that she lived during and after
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the Civil
War. This fact confirms that society afforded her little respect. Indeed,
the majority ofwhite people would have considered her little more than an
animal. However, an investigation of Phoeribes interaction with other
(obviously white) characters in the story proves that her noble character
commands respect despite her age, race, and sex. For example, when the hunter
points his gun at her, Phoenix responds by standing firm and facing him
straight on. The hunter's respect is evident in this comment, 'Well, Granny,
you must be a hundred years old and scared of nothing' (460). Furthermore,
when the elegant lady on the street stoops to tie Phoerlik's shoes, the reader
sees Phoenik's commanding, noble character at work. In fact, it would appear
that out of a crowd of people, Phoenix actually chooses this one particular
woman to lace up her shoes:
She paused quietly on the sidewalk where people were
passing by. A lady came along in the crowd, carrying an armful of...presents;
she gave off perfume like the red roses in hot summer, and Phoenix stopped her
(460).
Tradition says the phoenix
bird has an affinity for frankincense, aromatic gums, and spices. It is also
worthwhile to note that the "nice lady," as well as the hunter,
initially responds to Phoenix In a negative, perhaps derogatory, way by calling
her "Granny' or "Grandma." But in the final analysis, the lady
is (at least momentarily) at Phoenix7s feet, and the hunter voices his
admiration.
Phoenix's physical stature
stands in sharp contrast to the enormity of her journey. Welty establishes in
the first paragraph that Phoenix is very old and small. Me fact that her
walking could be aided and sustained by a thin, small cane made from an
umbrella provides the reader with a graphic Illustration of her diminutive
size. Her small size, of course, emphasizes, by contrast, Phoenixs giant‑sized
determination and perseverance.
Effects of old age,
particularly poor eyesight, intensifies Phoenix's dangerous trek. When the path
runs up a hill, Phoenix says, "Seem like there is chains about my feet,
time I get this far" (457). Poor vision is indicated throughout the story,
for example, "Old eyes thought you was a pretty little green bush"
(457). However, one uncanny incident occurs regarding PhoenbCs eyesight. She
sees "...with her own eyes a flashing nickel fall out of the man's pocket
onto the ground" (459). This episode supports the parallel drawn between
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Phoenix and the firebird‑‑she exercises
'bird‑like" vision. Perhaps she has long contemplated what she would
do if she had a nickel or a dime. Her eyes are able, therefore, to recognize
the quick flashing of silver. After Initiating a plan to remove the hunter from
the scene, Phoenix confidently picks the coin up and hides It in her pocket.
"I never did go to
school" (462), Phoenix tells the reader. Her lack of a formal education is
evident in her language
throughout the story. "Don't let none ............................... "... there is
chains ....... and
"I in the thorny bush" (457) are three of many
examples. 1he lack of a formal education,
however, does not
detract from Phoenix Jacksons recognizable
intefligence or
from her wisdom that comes with old age. One
clear demon
stration of this occurs when Phoenix, in a
split second, takes
charge and controls the actions of a young
white man (exactly
her opposite), as well as two dogs. It is
noteworthy that one
of these dogs, according to Phoenix, is
"...a big black
dog ... scared of nobody" (460). Is
Phoenix sly and cunning in
her determination to retrieve the dropped
nickel? Perhaps.
But there's no denying that the situation
requires a sharp
mind with quick exactness, and Phoenix,
despite her age,
rises for the occasion. (And once again she
is motivated by
lovej‑ The reader's acceptance of her
action is justified at the
conclusion of the story, when Phoenix decides
to spend the
coin for a toy for her sick grandson.
The character qualities of
intelligence, wisdom and resoluteness are also seen in her Interaction with
the attendant at the doctors office. The attendant greets Phoenix with a
battery of questions: 'What's your name?", 'What seems to be the trouble
with you?", and "Are you deaf?" (461). In contrast, by the end
of the nurse's interview with Phoenix, the attendants attitude has changed
somewhat because she asks Phoenix, "Could I give you a few pennies ... T
"Five pennies is a nickel," says Phoenix stiffly. "Here's a
nickel" (462), said the attendant. Here, as in prior situations, Phoenix
Jackson is in control, able to direct the situation and able to evoke her
desired response.
Phoenbes poverty is
Mustrated by the edxeme significance which she places upon five or ten cents.
Also, her attire suggests her destitution. She wears an apron made of bleached
sugar sacks, and she is quite concerned about damaging her dress or harming her
body while crawling through a barbed‑wire fence. She says that
"...she could not pay for having her arm or leg sawed off if she got
caught fast where she was" (458). Despite Phoenix's destitute situation,
her noble character thinks only of bringing happiness to her
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grandson when she finds herself with an unexpected
ten cents.
Race, sex, age, size,
poverty, senility, failing eyesight, lack of status and education are not able
to deter Phoenix Jacksorfs courageous resolve. Moreover, her life exemplifies
a life of dignity and integrity. For example, she respects and appreciates
nature. Upon being entangled by a thorn bush, she quips. '71iorns, you doing
your appointed work" (457). She is religious with a keen sense of right
and wrong. After she arranges the scenario for taking the nickel, she responds,
"God watching me the whole time" (460). There is also an interesting
contrast dr‑awn by Phoenix when she speaks of
".. the good Lord ......... and she follows in the very
next state‑
ment with a reference to a "...two‑headed
snake..." (458).
17his more sharply defines Phoeriix!s clearly
drawn lines of
right and wrong. Phoenix feels guilty for
taking the nickel,
but the delightful anticipation of putting a
smile on her
grandson' s face overcomes her conscience.
Noble character properly
balances pride and humility. For example, although PhoenWs clothes identify her
impoverished state, they are "...all neat and tidy..." (456).
Phoenix7s interaction with the "nice lady" also supports the same
traits: e.g., "Please, missy, will you lace up my shoe? ... Do all right
for out in the country, but wouldn't look right to go in a big building"
(460). The use of "please" and "thank you" exemplifies her
dignity. Upon her arrival at the doctor's office, she momentarily forgets why
she is there. Welty explains: "Phoenix was like an old woman begging a
dignified forgiveness..." (462).
The levity which Phoenix
brings to her situations sheds wonderful light on her character. People who can
"laugh at themselves" have a healthy perspective on life. A person
who can maintain a sense of humor and gaiety in Phoenix Jacksorfs situation is
a person who is emotionally healthy with a strong sense of self.
'You scarecrow," she said. Her face lighted. I
ought to be shut up for good," she said with laughter. "My senses is
gone ... Dance, old scarecrow," she said, "while I dancing with
you." She kicked her foot over the ftuTow, and with mouth drawn down,
shook her head once or twice in a little strutting way (458).
Phoenix Jackson's courage
and tenacity are illustrated repeatedly as she faces crisis after crisis during
her journey ‑‑a frozen day in December, animals in the thicket,
hills,
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thorny bushes, creeks, barbed‑wire fences, a
com field maze, superstition, a hunter's gun, a tower of steps, her own
forgetfiAness, and failing physical health‑‑all obstacles to be
overcome. And that's what Phoenix Jackson does. Welty comments early in the
story that "[Phoenix] looked straight ahead" (456). Twice Phoenix
herself comments to the hunter, I bound to go on" (459‑60).
Therefore, Eudora Welty has created, in the noble character of Phoenix, one who
is worthy of emulation and respect. In addition, anyone fortunate enough to be
the recipient of Phoenix Jackson's "habit of love" would be blessed
indeed.
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"The ]Lotteiryll:
Jackson's Use of Symbolism and Irony
by Barbara A.
Shively
Shirley Jackson's 'The Lottery' (reprinted in
Laurence Perrine. Literabire, Structure‑ Soiind. and Sense, 5th
ed. [San Diego: Harcourt, 19881 180‑186) is a story which depends heavily
on the use of symbolism and irony to portray its message. Symbolism alone
cannot effectively communicate the theme of The Lottery." It is the irony
of the story that makes the symbols meaningful. For example, a gratifying
reward for the lottery winner would be consistent with the reader's
expectations. In this story, however, the lottery prize is death. This ironic
twist gives meaning to tlvt,~
.e
many symbols of death which the reader finds
scattered throughout the story. 'vIbe Lottery' is filled with many examples of
symbolism and Irony which work together to develop the theme which deals with
the uncivilized state of society.
Death is perhaps the most
symbolized idea of 'The Lottery." One of the first symbols the reader
recognizes in the story is the use of the color black. Black is a universal
symbol representing death. It is traditional for people in many societies to
wear black clothing or armbands, to ftmerals. A widow is often expected to
dress in black for a period of time after her husband dies. In this story,
black is the color of the box which contains the slips of paper to be drawn in
the lottery (180). The black spot on the paper designates the winning slip. 11his spot is made "with the
heavy pencil in the coal company office" (186). Mie coal company is a
place where black coal. which is made from things long dead, is taken from a
place deep within the earth. The coal company is also the place where the black
box containing the black spot is locked up in a safe the night before the
lottery (18 1). Thus, the reader finds another symbol of death in the coal
company. Me idea of impending death is also symbolized by the pile of stones
which the village children have gathered (180). This symbol is defined not only
within the context of the story but also within some universal definition in
that the
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stoning of people was perhaps one of the earliest
forms of punishment devised by man.
Tradition and ritual are
other important elements In The Lottery." The black box also symbolizes
these elements because of the importance which the villagers have attached to
the role of the box in the ritual of the lottery. The box was something which
had really outlived its useffilness by becoming so dilapidated. The box is
described as "growing shabbier each year ... it was no longer completely
black but splintered badly along one side to show the original wood color, and
in some places faded or st‑ained" (181). The fact that the box lost
its importance in the periods between lotteries is evident from the way in
which it was stored: 'The rest of the year, the box was out away, sometimes one
place, sometimes another, it had spent one year in Mr. Graves's barn and
another year underfoot In the post office, and sometimes R was set on a shelf
in the Martin grocery and left there" (18 1). Butwhen W. Summers tried to
convince the villagers to make a new box, no one wanted to upset the tradition
the old box mpresented. They believed the box was older than the oldest member
of the village and contained pieces of wood from the first box made when the
village was settled (181). Thus, the reader views the box not only as an
Important symbol in the lottery ritual but also as representing something which
has outlived its usefulness to society and should have been discarded, but as
the lottery itself is a tradition that should have been abandoned.
'ahe LotteW uses certain
characters as Important symbols. Old Man Warner is used to portray the conflict
between old and young, tradition and change. Old Man Warner has endured. as the
lottery has endured, through many years. In Old Man Warner's mind, the very
fact that the lottery, like himself, has lasted so long validates its
useffilness. He believes that it is the young people who foolishly question the
lottery and push for change (183). The fact that "young Joe Summers [is]
up there joking with everyone" (184) during the lottery proceedings is
taken by Old Man Warner as a sign of disrespect‑‑for the tradition.
Another symbolic character
is Tessle Hutchinson. Though it is not evident until almost the end of the
story, she is really the primary symbol around which the theme of the story revolves.
Tessie represents the scapegoat. 'Me scapegoat is a universal symbol which
dates back to ancient times. OriginaRy, a goat was selected to take on
symbolically the sins of people. Like the scapegoat, Tessie is the one chosen
to take on the sins andsubsequent punishment of the villagers. She
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is the token sacrifice which is offered as atonement
for the collective sins of all. These sins also are symbolically represented
by the bits of paper which are dropped to the ground and blown away after the
drawing (185). Near the end of the story these same slips of paper are later
seen mixed with the pile of stones (186).
The ironic twists the story
takes provide the basis for the interpretation of the symbols used throughout
the story. The use of irony starts with the title, "Me Lottery." The
reader's expectation that the prize awarded to the winner will be something
ofworth is dispelled near the end of the story when the tragic reward to the
winner of the lottery is revealed. Other ironies are used frequently to build
the readef s expectations of something which is very different from the
reality of the situation. 'Me story is set on a beautiffil, clear and sunny
summer's day (180), the type of day in which the reader would expect only good
things to happen. The cheerful mood of the crowd and the playffilness of the
children contribute to this expectation. But the expected does not happen, and
the reader realizes at the end of the story that this is a day which is truly
tragic. The fact that conducting the lottery is a very complicated learned
behavior is also ironic. Learned behavior should represent a societys
advancement in knowledge and refinement, but in this story it seems to be a
better reflection of the villagers' stupidity and societal regression.
Certain characters and their
relationships with others are also used to portray irony. One such example of
irony is Nk. Summers, a round‑faced jovial man who conducts square
dances. But he is also the person who prepares the death notice by marking a
piece of paper with a black spot and then overseeing the selection of the
lottery's victim. Me character of Tessie also portrays irony when her jovial
mood changes to one of bitter resentment at being chosen the lottery's winner.
The lottery was ftm‑filled entertainment as long as she expected the
prize to be awarded to someone else. The lottery only became unfair in Tessie's
mind when the outcome affected her personally. Me expected love which is
usually found in the mother‑daughter bond is replaced by Tessie's desire
for her own married daughter to take another chance at becoming the lottery
scapegoat (184). The love of a child for its mother is twisted into something
horrible when "someone gave Davy Hutchinson a few pebbles" (186) to
throw at his mother. At the beginning of the story, Ws. Delacroix seemed to be
a good friend of Tessie's. But at the end, the reader finds that Ws. Delacroix
"selected a stone so large she had to pick it up with both hands"
(186). Old Man Warner
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believes that the viRagers will become more barbaric
if the lottery is discontinued. In reality, there could not be a more barbaric
ritual than that of the lottery.
Even the idea of death
itself takes on a certain irony in this story. 'The Lottery" is a story in
which death is the culmination of a symbolic societal ritual which has its
basis in ancient traditions. Me original concepts associated with a scapegoat
and its sacrifice are ones of rebirth and the forgiveness of sins. But in
reality, much of the ritual of the lottery had been forgotten and Its meaning
lost. The present function of the lottery, as presented in this particular
story, seems to be one of death for the purpose of entertainment, rather than
as a means of rebirth and the forgiveness of sins. The mbdng of the slips of
paper with the pile of stones near the end of the story may be seen as the
final ironic combination of two symbols. This symbolic combination emphasizes
the fact that, rather than being a resolution of the vil.1agers' sinfulness.Tessies
death is actuaRy a perpetuation of their sinfulness. Sinfulness is a term
often equated with a barbaric, uncivilized society. Since to be civilized means
to be brought out of the savage state‑‑to be educated and refined‑‑the
vffiagers in 'The Lottery," by continuing to practice an old ritual which
has lost its Intended meaning, find themselves becoming less, rather than more,
civilized.
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In‑Class Theme on
Decision‑Making in
"A Domestic Dilemmal
" "The Guest," and
"The Japanese Quince It
by Joyce Kay B. Wampler
The ability to make
decisions is an important. inescapable
necessity for a liffilled life, a life which enjoys
contentment and a strong
sense of self‑worth. Decision
making in its process,
produces some amount of cognitive
dissonance; but, in the long
rim, the dissonance is overcome
by a sense of balance and emotional well‑being. This
hypothesis is revealed in
three short stories: "A Domestic
Dilemma," 'The
Guest," and 'The Japanese Quince."
(Reprinted in Laurence
Perrine, Literature* Structure, Sound,
and Sense, 5th ed. [San Diego: Harcourt, 19881.
Martin Meadows, the major
character in "A Domestic Dilemma," illustrates the on‑going
results of his inability to make a decision. As he vacillates between intellect
(knowing what he needs to do) and emotion (allowing love and/or desire to stop
him), the quality of each family member is adversely affected. Fits
indecisiveness results in his own emotional disturbance, a risk to his
children~s mental and physical health, and the wasted vigor and giftedness of
his wife. Some excerpts validate these points: "In this last year nearness
[at home] brought only a sense of tension..." (97); "Andy had managed
to plug in the Christmas tree lights" (98); "...she [Emily] made no
friends In the suburban town. She read only magazines and murder books"
(101). Everyone would have benefitted if Martin had decided to get professional
help for his wife. Interestingly, the setting in this story gives the reader
sharp imagery of the dilemma, the "warmness" of the south is far
removed from the "coldness" of the north‑‑as far as
emotion can be from the intellect.
Daru, the leading character
in "Me Guest," attempts to move himself to a place of safety, a place
where he would be removed from having to make major decisions (he was a
Frenchman living in Algeria; this divergence of cultures
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created his dilemma). He soon discovers that
decision‑makIng cannot be eluded.
Daru's dilemma becomes more
complex as a result of spending time with the Arab. Instead of treating the
Arab as a prisoner, Daru treats him like a friend and guest. 11iis would
(perhaps) not be a problem if Daru were to make a conscious decision to aid in
freeing the prisoner. Instead, however, Daru prefers to maintain his position
of being "removed" from the situation. However, the dissonance Daru
experiences is exemplified in the following quote: "But It bothered him
because it imposed on him a sort of brotherhood he refused to accept.... Men
who share the same rooms ... develop a strange alliance ... they fraternized
... over and above their differences..." (194).
Toward the presumed end of
the conflict, when Daru has equipped the Arab for his walk toward imprisonment or
freedom, Daru is again challenged to take a stand: "[Looking at the Arab
still standing on the edge of the hill] ... Daru felt something rise in his
throat'(196). But instead of committing himself, Daru "swore with
impatience, waved vaguely, and started off agairf' (196). Ultimately, Darus
indecisiveness results in someone's deciding for him. In an Ironic twist, the
Arab's brothers announce, 'You handed over our brother. You will pay for
this" (196). Daru, by maldng a decision, would have ended his internal
conflicts and saved himself a lot of future grief.
Tandrarn and Nilson In '71he
Japanese Quince" are, like Meadows and Daru, men with internal conflicts.
Also, like the other characters, instead of making a decision to overcome
their dilemma, they remain in their stagnant places of isolation which result
in emotional stress which has, manifestations of physical illness. For
example, "...a peculiar sweetish sensation In his throat, and a feeling of
emptiness just under his rib" (62). Tandrarn and Nilson, as well as
Meadows and Daru, reach a crisis in their dilemma‑‑places where
conflicts could end. In this story, the Japanese Quince symbolizes this place
of potential resolution. However, neither of the men has the courage to decide
to overcome tradition, thus improving their physical and emotional existences.
'Iheir inability to express their feelings (i.e., to make a positive decision)
causes the quality of their lives to continue to deteriorate.
These three short stories
graphically reflect the results of indecisiveness: no decision is a decision of
sorts. And although, in the initial stages, not maldng a decision appears
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to
be the easiest thing to do in the end, it can prove fatal to one's emotional
and physical health.
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Explication of "To His Coy
Mistress"
by Marlene Bnznmer
Tiine is of the essence in Andrew Marvell's 'To His
Coy Mistress" (reprinted In Laurence Perrine, Literabire, Structure.
Sound. and Sense, 5th ed. [San Diego: Harcourt, 19881580) as the eager
lover pursues his shy mistress. 'Ihe title itself immediately leads us to
believe that the lover's task convincing his lady to yield to his desires, will
not be an easy one. But this clever lover, pleading with his lady, supports his
case with the persuasive argument that their love is limited by the brevity of
time. Ibis poem is written using Iambic tetrameter couplets. The poem also
contains couplets to emphasize a major idea. If time were not limited, then the
lover would pursue his lady for all eternity. However, because time Is limited,
the conclusion is that the couple must make love now before it is too late.
Three distinct sections of the poem Introduced by "had, " 'but,
" and "now" support the lover's views.
The lover begins by fift‑ting
with his lady, speaking to her heart and not her mind. He tells her all the
things she wishes to hear and desperately longs to believe. He assures her the
geographic limitations, he on the Humber River in England and she by the Indian
Ganges River, would not impose any major obstacles to their love. Referring to
the biblical themes 'before the flood" and "till the conversion of
the Jews," the lover convinces his lady of his sincerity which encompasses
the beginning to the end of time. In expressing his affections, the lover
exaggerates his lady's physical qualities. emphasizing that they deserve to be
admired hundreds and even thousands of years before she consents to his desire,
and he, of course, would expect no less. However, he presents her with the
qualifier: "Had we but world enough, and time. "
"But" introduces
the second segment of the poem as the lover's tone becomes more serious. He
shifts his persuasion from the emotions of his lady's heart to the reality
ofher mind. Stressing the fact that time is limited and man is mortal, he
states: "Time's winged chariot [is] hurrying near; / And yonder all before
us lie/ Deserts of vast eternity." The lover finally plays again on his
lady's emotions in stanza three,
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her that her coyness is not practical. wise. or in
her best interest. Draping her dreams with a shroud of fear and loneliness, the
lover presents his lady with a morbid image of life from the grave. He darkens
her thoughts with a haunting vision of a prIvate vault, void of her once
youdiffil beauty and of his constant devotion. As a final attempt to persuade
his lady, he attacks her most cherished possession as he pathetically pleads
his desire: 'Worms shall try/That long‑preserved virginity./And your
quaint honor turn to dust,/And into ashes all my lust." FInaly, having
sung praises to his lady's heart and having presented the harsh facts of
reality to her conscious mind, he now appeals to her eager emotions. While she
is young, willing, and sexually aroused, he implores her to make love with him.
Rather than talking about their love, he urges that they should now act,
devouring their time 'like amorous birds of prey." Perceiving his lover's
readiness to make love. he continues to cement her commitment by telling her
they should join all their "strength"and "sweetness"Into
one being. Calming her fears, he assures her their pleasure will withstand any
of life's barriers when he asserts: "and Iwe shall] tear our pleasures
with rough strife/through the iron gates of life."
Me lover concludes his
persuasion to Iiis lady by referring to the god Apollo as a ftnal tribute to
their love. Me lover speaks to his lady, proclaiming, 'Thus, though we cannot
make our sun/stand still, yet we will make him run." Perhaps the couple's
passionate desire cannot stop time, but they can make it appear to race as fast
as their hearts as they now make love.
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Ethics
by Michael L.
Huning
n Linda Pastan's poem "Ethics" (reprinted
In Laurence Perrine, Literature‑ Structure. Sound‑ and Sense, 5th
ed. [San Diego: Harcourt, 19881 795‑796), the speaker looks through the
eyes of a female student of ethics. Every fall, like clockwork, the ethics
teacher poses the same scenario to her students, one that will test their
values and expose their individual ethics. The teacher asks, "...If there
were a fire in a museum which would you save, a Rembrandt painting/or an old
woman who hadn7t many/years left anyhow"? This tormenting situation would
challenge the average man's scruples but was quite ineffective with these
restless and uncaring students. Unable to make a sincere decision, many
students would just alternate between choices whenever the annual crisis chose
to surface in the mind of the teacher.
To instill compassion in her
students, the teacher would ask them to imagine a close relative, such as a
grandmother, the victim in the inferno. This alteration of the scenario did
little more than allow the student to ponder how her grandmother had found her
way from the kitchen to this "...drafty, half‑imagined
museum" (12).
The speaker
finally makes a feeble attempt to solve this emotional bind by allowing the old
woman in the museum to decide for herself whether she wishes to live or to die.
The teacher counters this proposal by stating that the option of allowing the
old woman to choose is but a creative way of relieving the student of
"...the burden of responsibility' (16). Now, in the fall, many years
later, the speaker finds herself to be that old woman standing in front of a
Rembrandt. She now feels the drafty museum and the cold floor beneath her, the
feeling which was burned into her mind so often during her youth. 1he painting
that she chose to save every now and again in the past, now begins to become
animated before her, burning and consuming the canvas that it was painted on so
long ago.
It is here
that the speaker realizes the frustration of her youth and inability to make a
decision of the heart. It is
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because "...that woman and painting and season
are almost one and all beyond saving by children" (25).
Although this poem is very
much a visual narrative lending itself to imagery, it also speaks a symbolic
language that communicates more than the poetic surface can hold. Beneath the mantle
of blank verse and narration lies a rich bed of symbolism that speaks to the
heart through the words rather than to the mind.
"Ethics... opening
scene is in a classroom, one not so different from today's, filled with
students who have come, by obligation or interests, to learn about ethics. This
classroom symbolizes life in its simplest form. We are the children here,
trapped within the four walls of the world, obligated to live life as we are
taught, for we know no better way. Daily we are asked to judge, as were the
children in the poem, to weigh the consequences of our actions and to make the
dot decision. The choice between saving an old woman and a Rembrandt painting
is quite simple. The secret lies in the choice of feeling or thinking.
If one were to think about
the situation, the answer is quite clear. Even a layman can discern that a
fully intact Rembrandt is worth a hundred times more in dollars than the
charred carcass of an old woman and that the publicity would make the savior a
celebrity from that time forth.
If, on the other hand, one
were to have compassion for the situation, the answer is also quite obvious.
Whether the old woman's birth certificate is about to expire, or whether she is
a close relative, is of no consequence. The feelings of the heart value life
over the inanimate and will do all that is necessaiy and possible to preserve
it.
The indecision on the part
of the student symbolizes the struggle between mind and heart as does the
restlessness caused by the students' sitting in the hard chairs. The chairs are
the reinforcement of cold, hard facts, numbers and logic. These are the
elements which society believes are the essence of making a sound decision.
The poem's jump of about
fifty years represents the way the elderly tend to see life. 'Me student is now
an old woman and ironically finds herself in front of the Rembrandt, in that
drafty museum, which symbolizes how life tends to stay the same the more it
changes. She describes the painting and depicts an image of the end of living
and the end of the world.
It is here the speaker
realizes the relation of the painting, the old woman, and the season. It is
here she sees the intertwining of thoughts and feelings and is saddened because
she has wasted her life struggling between heart and
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mind as time crept along. She sees that people today
are useless and unable to change the world around them. The indecisiveness of
society has come from the struggle between the heart and the mind and the
inability to resolve the matter, a struggle which results in the worst state of
all, indifference.
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In‑Class Comparison of
"God's Will for You and
Me"
and "Pied Beauty it
by Connie Accurso
od7s Will for You and
Me" is a poem about the way the Gauthor perceives God's desire for our
lives. "Pied Beauty" shows us how to appreciate the variety in Go(Ts
creation. (Both poems are reprinted in Laurence Perrine, Literature*
Structure, Sound, and Sense, 5th ed. [San Diego: Harcourt, 19881 735).'Me
theme of each poem is similar, but the poets use vastly different styles of
writing. It is easy to conclude that the two poems reflect human beings'
relations with God. It is at this point, however, that the similarity between
the two ends.
The author of "God's
Will for You and Me" paints an image of a perfect world. When one first
reads this poem, It might strike one as being delightful because the words tell
of a world that all human beings would want to live in. Not only does this perfect
image emerge but the repetition of the words "Just to be..." may
Indicate that this perfection is easy to attain. After thirteen repetitions of
"Just to be...," however, the reader is left with no real meaning
Imprinted in his or her mind. The author uses no means of imagery or symbolism
for the reader to ponder. In fact, the reader could have a tendency to wonder
if the goals of the poem are possible when he or she reads such lines as
"Just to be cheery when things go wrong" or "Just to drive sadness
away with a song." The idea expressed sounds all well and good, but is
this superior goodness true to life? Is this the way we think about our
relationship with God? It seems somewhat contradictory because no matter how
one wishes that life could be perfect, it is not; therefore, finding any depth
of meaning in this poem is difficult. The last line, as well as the title
itself, states, 'That is God's will for you and me." If the reader has a
firm belief in God, the question left from reading this poem could be this:
"If God wants all this goodness and perfection in my life, why do I have
so many problems?" 1he answer, of course,
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is that we do not live in a perfect world but in an
imperfect one.
"Pied Beauty,"
(Perrine 735) in contrast, describes with a great deal of imagery an imperfect
world and shows how God fits into this world. 'Me title itself implies that
imperfection is beautdW. Webster defines "pied" as "covered with
patches or spots of two or more colors." Certainly the world is made up of
patches, of spots, and of people of different colors. "Patches and
spots" can let the reader's mind fill with images of imperfection in the
world as a whole or confine his or her thoughts to his or her personal life.
The first line gives praise to God for "dappled
things," for imperfect things. Instantly the reader knows that this
poem speaks of real life. 'Me phrase 'landscape plotted and pieced..." not
only paints the image of our landscapes in both farm and city as being torn up
and no longer perfect in God's eyes but also can suggest to the reader that,
though the landscapes of our lives are no longer perfect, we can thank God for
them. Me author says that "all trades, their gear and tackle and
trim" are reasons to thank God. No matter what the job is in this world,
no matter what goes along with thatjob, it serves a purpose, and for that
purpose R is considered beautffW.
'Me second stanza in
"Pied Beauty' speaks to the reader about contrast in life. "All
things counter, original, spare, strange..." are reasons to praise God.
Whether one goes against something, as the word "counter" implies or
whether something is "original" or perhaps "spare," meaning
actra, the reader is reassured that it is beautiftil to God. Me real heart of
the poemis found in the words 'With swift, slow‑, sweet, sour‑,
adazzle, dim;/ He fathers‑forth whose beauty is past change."
Despite the fact that life is full of contrast and change, God comes to us with
unchangeable, fatherly love. The author presents life in its changeable and
somewhat unstable way so that the unchangeable God can be more ftifly
appreciated.
'Me use of imagery and
symbolism in "Pied Beauty'makes for more interesting and meaningftd
reading than is found in the first poem. 'Ihe repetition of sound, rhythm and
meter in "God's Will for You and Me" makes the poem boring and
uneventful. The reader is left with no real image to hang onto and a feeling
that this imperfect world should be perfect in every way. "Pied
Beauty," on the other hand, tells the reader of real life and shows how
the infinite variety in life is something to be thankful for.
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An Analysis of the Use of Irony in Wilfred Owen's
"Dulce Et Decorum Est"
by demefte SkeUy
Est," (reprinted in Laurence Perrine, .
Sound. and SenSe, 5th ed. [San Diego: Harcourt, 19881514), Wilfred Owen
takes the reader to the battlefield during World War 1. The title and the final
lines of the poem are taken from a Latin quotation which translates thus: 'It
is sweet and becoming to the for one's country. Ms quotation conjures up images
of heroes, bravery, and men charging headlong into battle for their country.
However, in reading the poem, one discovers that Owen is using the title and
closing ironically because the poem is not about heroes but about the misery
and death experienced by soldiers who are retreating fromthe front line of
battle.
For example, Owen's use of
comparisons and imagery is very effective in bringing to life the real
hardships and sufferings of soldiers during a war. `1he troops in his poem are
not heroes standing erect and charging their enemy. `Ihey are soldiers who are
"Bent double, like old beggars under sacks"(1) and are retreating,
with the battle raging on behind them. These men are so weary that they have
become almost immune to the sights and sounds of the war. Details such as
"Men marched asleep" (5). "went lame" (6),
"blind" (6), and "deaf even to the hoots/Of gas‑shel1s,
dropping softly behind" (7‑8), serve well to characterizejust how
haggard and demoralized these men have become. However, there is still one
element of the war that pumps enough life into these soldiers to allow them to
fit their "clumsy helmetsJust in time" (10): the fear of the horrible
death which comes from mustard gas. Owen describes the panic of soldiers trying
to fit their helmets as "An ecstasy of fumbling" (19). However, one
soldier is just not quick enough and breathes the gas, and Owen uses vivid
imagery to detail the man's gruesome death The dying soldier is "yelling
out and stumbling/And floundring like a man in fire or lime" (11‑
12). The soldier's lungs have been destroyed by the gas; hence he appears to
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put the dying man into a wagon, they could hear ,at
every jolt, the blood/Come gargling from the froth‑corrupted lungs/Bitter
as the cud of vile incurable sores... "(21‑24). 'Ihe young man dies
for his country, but his death is not sweet.
In the final stanza of the
poem, Owen appeals to his readers who have never been in battle or seen
innocent young men the to refi‑ain from bring to these young men by
telling them that "it is sweet and becoming to the for one's country'
(28). He wants his readers to know from his poem that war is a rotten
"bill of goods" sold to young men who see war as a chance to show
their bravery, strength, and honor for their country. These young men yearn to
become heroes. However, there are very few heroes in war but much misery,
horror, and death. Mis is the irony that Owen wants his readers to realize
about war: War is not glorious. War is hell.
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